For the last 14 years at least, a world has been taking shape in my mind, and for the past eight years or so, I've been working on a story that takes place within it.
So far (January 2015), the draft of that story is at over 200,000 words and over 600 pages. I'm sure I'll need to cut out a lot.
I'm currently seeking readers to give critiques. I'm also looking for artists to help visualize characters and scenes, and to design cards (see below).
Do I hope to interest some of my readers in this? Do I hope to entice people to read? I do.
What's it about? Hmmmm.
What if I try to show you this way: here are some of the interests and curiosities that have driven my writing, and made their way into the story so far (and I expect to update this from time to time):
- Religion. I'm a native of Utah, a product of Mormon pioneer history, and despite my frustrations with the modern culture, I have a deep respect and affection for the place of my birth, including its religious history. In one sense this whole enterprise is a love letter to my homeland.
- One of the central episodes in the history of my main culture is loosely based on the story of Abinadi and Alma in the Book of Mormon, Mosiah chapters 11 to 25. The working title for this novel is Confessions and Heresies and the plot revolves around the discovery of a manuscript believed to be a copy of a lost book written by an influential prophet (based on the figure of Alma). But the faiths in the world aren't intended to be copies of my own or of others in our world: I'm trying in my own way to combine the themes, questions and answers that perplex all humanity, in religious systems that have their own character even if they allude to earthly creeds.
- Numismatics and the history of money. Some of my readers will no doubt have played fantasy role-playing games with neat decimal money systems: 10 copper = 1 silver, 10 silver = 1 gold . . . What's good for game mechanics I believe is generally bad for fiction and vice-versa. I've spent hours obsessing over comparative values of precious metals, the history of currencies from weights to coins and so on. I think I'm ok with the money systems used in my main cultures now. I considered basing them on the one outlined in the Book of Alma, chapter 11, but decided not to.
- Libertarian/anarchist economic theories. I owe a great debt to Kevin Carson for articulating many of my yearnings for a better world. This blog still retains more than a touch of its former focus as a bleeding heart libertarian blog (yes, that is a thing, ask Professor Peart). The world I'm creating got its start from the same yearnings and the same questions: what would a society look like in which mechanism didn't lead to the tragic, destructive industrialization that has shaped our world? For example, what if mass production was from the start kept localized and small-scale, managed by the workers and subordinated to the material needs of the host communities? There's a Rilke sonnet that expresses quite eloquently the state of affairs I want to write against: what if the machine did keep to itself in its factories as an obedient servant? (You can read an alternate English translation and the original German here.)
- I realized fairly early on that to try to write a completely ideal/utopian society wouldn't work, so I'm trying to allow my world to have enough problems to be interesting. It does have some pretty serious problems: besides economic injustices, there are also some serious sexual exploitations and violations, even in societies where women systematically hold positions of great power. The protagonist's life is shaped by the effects of these.
- Card games. I became very interested in the history of Tarot cards as games a few years ago, and I have started building up a modest collection of them through Taro Bear's Lair (this is not an affiliate link). In my world I have designed several decks of playing cards of varying sizes and designs, and I entertain a Quixotic - or Borgesian - dream of printing some of these and selling them: a Tlön-ish sort of enterprise. (And in fact, Jorge Luis Borges has been one of my important inspirations, as I mention below.)
- Speaking of Tlön, the work of counter-factual history enthusiasts has been of tremendous interest and influence to me over the years. For example, the group project of Ill Bethisad shows the kind of thoroughness and imagination that I seek to emulate in my own worldbuilding.
- Depth psychology. I started reading Carl Jung a few years ago, working my way through the heavy black tomes of his collected works as time allowed. One of my regrets in life is not appropriating the entire set from the discard shelves of the university library where I used to work: those volumes are hard to find! But it's nice to re-read Memories, Dreams, Reflections from time to time too. (That was an affiliate link. But I don't care how you get the book, I only recommend strongly that you read it.)
- Sacred geometry. The ruling icon of my core societies is a set of variations on the circle quartered by the cross, sometimes referred to in American Indian traditions as a Sacred Hoop or Medicine Wheel. So strong is its influence in the dominant religion and culture of the region that there hasn't been much attention paid to five-pointed stars/pentagrams, Metatron cubes or other such things. But one of the other major world religions does use five-pointed stars as symbols.
My debt to Tolkien seems so obvious to me that I don't feel the need to discuss it at length, beyond pointing out that my enterprise is not to write a mythically-based story, nor is there magic in my world. But yes, I have created several languages for it, in varying stages of detail.
Some of the authors whose work has most strongly influenced me - whether or not that shows in my writing (this list includes affiliate links):
Samuel R. Delany
Carl G. Jung
Jorge Luis Borges